Thursday, 8 August 2013

The big foot print

The big foot print One day I went to the beach. I found a big foot print! I screamed. I went closer and it got bigger. I called my 6 friends. They come and screamed too. "Where did that come from?" we said. Suddenly we heard this roar. It was a giant. Me and my friends ran and ran as fast as we could. Me and my friends ran to our house. We shut the door and hid under the beds. The giant smashed all the windows and doors. Where else could we hid? The end

1 comment:

  1. Hi Chloe. What a great piece of writing! You inject a lot if excitement and suspense into your piece. I am also impressed by your use of punctuation, especially in the direct speech and rhetorical question. Well done.