Thursday 7 November 2013

Fire works poem

FIREWORKS.
Bright sparkly fireworks all around, loud like a lion roaring in the zoo.
Bright bright fireworks making loads of noise
flashing lights everywhere.
Fireworks bombing in the dark blue sky.
extraordinary huge balls of sparkles everywhere!


3 comments:

  1. I like your poem, I thought it was creative.

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  2. Great job!That was very good my favorite part was when you compared the fireworks to lions at the zoo!

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  3. I thought the this was a beautiful poem.

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