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The big fat marshmallow

One night I went to a concert. It was a long concert. I was so so tired. I couldn't wait to get home. Suddenly  there was  a shining bright light. I  could not see a thing my eyes were  so sore. I stood back and I bumped in to some one and it was a big fat pink and white marshmallow. It was the size of a giant!
 to be continued....!!!!

Fire works poem

FIREWORKS.

Bright sparkly fireworks all around, loud like a lion roaring in the zoo.

Bright bright fireworks making loads of noise

flashing lights everywhere.

Fireworks bombing in the dark blue sky.

extraordinary huge balls of sparkles everywhere!

1D movie premirere in the uk.

 

One Direction movie premiere in the uk            One Direction movie premiere in the UK Created on August 21, 2013 Thousands of fans have greeted One Direction in the UK for their premiere This Is Us. Some fans have been waiting since Sunday night to get a prime spot to watch the boys arrive on the red carpet. The film, which is out in the UK on August 29, follows the band on tour on their rise to worldwide fame. Speaking at a press conference, ahead of Tuesday’s premiere, One D member Harry said making the film was a ‘strange’ experience. “In a way it was really strange having the cameras around, but at the same time it didn’t make that much difference. The movie is in 3D, and will be in New Zealand later in the year. One Direction movie premiere in the UK Created on August 21, 2013 Created on August 21, 2013

spider map

The spooky home!

 There was  a  home that  was green and  in side the holo home there was soft ground and when I went into the home the door was sqekey!and it had ice on the door! The path had rocks on it it was fantastic!! The moon was shining in the sky.


This is my draft piece of writing. Please leave a comment about what I did well and what I need to work on.

Easter

It was Easter on Sunday and I got 4 Easter eggs and I gave one to my brother and one  to my other brother and I ate one. How many are left? If you know make a comment and tell me.

2012 reflectoin

In 2012 my favourite memory was when we did athletics it was so fun. My worst memory was when I got hurt in room2.
Next year I am looking forward to being a year 3!

NIE papers

 On Monday me and my friends did some NIE papers it was about farms and cows. We found out how much grass a cow can eat a day it was hard but we got there.  My friends are called Alyssa and Shelby.