Thursday, 20 February 2014

The big fat marshmallow

One night I went to a concert. It was a long concert. I was so so tired. I couldn't wait to get home. Suddenly  there was  a shining bright light. I  could not see a thing my eyes were  so sore. I stood back and I bumped in to some one and it was a big fat pink and white marshmallow. It was the size of a giant!
 to be continued....!!!!

5 comments:

  1. What was the light?
    Its interesting, you explained very well.

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  2. To Chloe.
    I like your story.
    My favourite part was when you stood back and bumped into
    a big pink and white marshmallow.
    From Manaia.

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  3. Hi Cloe! I'm Elizabeth. What happened when you bumped into the marshmallow? That was an interesting story!

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  4. Is that place actually scary. We have really scary ones here .

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