Thursday 20 February 2014

The big fat marshmallow

One night I went to a concert. It was a long concert. I was so so tired. I couldn't wait to get home. Suddenly  there was  a shining bright light. I  could not see a thing my eyes were  so sore. I stood back and I bumped in to some one and it was a big fat pink and white marshmallow. It was the size of a giant!
 to be continued....!!!!
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  1. Anonymous25 February 2014 at 08:34

    What was the light?
    Its interesting, you explained very well.

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  2. Anonymous25 February 2014 at 08:51

    What concert was it?

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  3. Powerful Learners in Room 7!25 February 2014 at 10:36

    To Chloe.
    I like your story.
    My favourite part was when you stood back and bumped into
    a big pink and white marshmallow.
    From Manaia.

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  4. Anonymous26 February 2014 at 08:39

    Hi Cloe! I'm Elizabeth. What happened when you bumped into the marshmallow? That was an interesting story!

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  5. Anonymous26 February 2014 at 08:52

    Is that place actually scary. We have really scary ones here .

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